Outline number two

Topic: university study.

Thesis statement: people should decide what to study according to their interests.

My outline:

I. Introduction/Thesis statement: students should decide what to study according to their interests, and not to what other people think is best for them.

II. During the degree

   A. Lack of interest and motivation

      1. It is harder to study something you don't like

      2. More probabilities to drop out college

III. After de degree

   A. Work in something you don't like for the rest of your life

      1. No motivation to wake up in the morning

      2. Life happier because you spend most part of your time at work

IV. Once retired

   A. Wondering why

      1. What could have happen?

      2. Would I be happier?

V. Conclusion: for all these reasons, everyone should have the will to decide what they want to dedicate the rest of their lives.

Reader's outline:

I. Introduction: However, students should decide what to study according to their interests, and not to what other people think is best for them.

II. Lack of interest and motivation.

   A. It doesn't create interest to you.

   B. More likely to drop out college.

III. Once they are finished, they start working

   A. They won't like their job.

      1. wake up early everyday

      2. No motivation to work

   B. They aren't happy at their job, and therefore their life isn't happy either

IV. Once they've retired

   A. Start wondering

      1. Did I study what I really liked?

      2. Would I have been happier?

V. Conclusion: for all these reasons, everyone should have the will to decide what they want to dedicate the rest of their lives.